Haiku Friday – Wait & Move

13 Feb

Welcome to Haiku Friday . . .

RonovanWrites Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt Challenge #31

Taking on the challenge one more week, prompt words Wait & Move 

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Longing

by Vashti Quiroz-Vega

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I was moved by you

Your love proved ephemeral

why do I still wait

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Do you have plans for Valentine’s Day? If so, what are you doing? Is Valentine’s Day just another day for you?

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19 Responses to “Haiku Friday – Wait & Move”

  1. A Long February 13, 2015 at 5:13 pm #

    Love the esoteric question Vashti!

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  2. Yolanda Isabel Regueira Marin February 13, 2015 at 5:21 pm #

    Bitter sweet Vashti 😍

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  3. olganm February 13, 2015 at 6:48 pm #

    Very good, but sad, although I guess most people have wondered that at some point. Doing nothing special. I Hope you have a good day

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega February 16, 2015 at 3:13 pm #

      Hello Olga! Thank you! It’s symbolic of that searing, wrenching pain one feels when one’s heart is broken. 🙂 I had a sweet and peaceful Valentine’s Day surrounded by love––what more can you ask for? Did you get a book and a rose? ❤

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  4. doreen@househoneys February 14, 2015 at 7:05 pm #

    It’s not normally just another day for us, but this year, since we are traveling and admittedly quite tired tonight, we are doing nothing but watching tv, eating leftovers and catching up on my favorite blogs ;).

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega February 16, 2015 at 3:09 pm #

      Hi Doreen! I love it that you’re having a blast on your travel adventure. Like I told April, Valentine’s Day doesn’t always have to be a big production. You were with your hubby and you were having fun. That’s all that counts. I’m glad my blog is one of your favorites. I feel the same about yours. 😀 xx

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  5. Ronovan February 14, 2015 at 9:25 pm #

    Um, I skeered now. Running away. Okay, shuffling away as fast as I can.

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega February 16, 2015 at 3:06 pm #

      Hi Ron! Ha, ha! Don’t be so skittish. 😉 I don’t bite . . . unless I’m hungry. No––seriously, I imagine that heartbreak can feel like this for some people. :p

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  6. April G February 15, 2015 at 8:41 pm #

    Up early to move
    To see that I have to wait
    For Valentine show

    LOL! Lame…. ! We didn’t do anything. We rented a movie, but didn’t watch it because I didn’t get home from church until 8:30 and then my husband cooked then. By the time he was done, I was exhausted and sick!

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega February 16, 2015 at 3:03 pm #

      Love it! I used to be intimidated by haiku poetry but now I love it. It seems that the more you write the better you get at it. Valentine’s Day doesn’t have to be a big production every year. As long as you’re with your loved ones––I think that’s what’s important. I went on a picnic with my husband and mom. Ha, ha! I had a good time. We were at a beautiful place and it was very relaxing. 🙂

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  7. JESS44903 February 18, 2015 at 10:17 am #

    What a cute Valentine’s Haiku! 🙂

    Thanks for joining the Link Up this week!

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  8. Kevin J. Hotter May 21, 2015 at 4:44 pm #

    Great work, Vashti. You have a real talent for Haiku. Your words really resonate, and are beautifully written.

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