Haiku Friday – New & Time

17 Apr

I’m running a bit late today. Sorry, life got in the way. The prompt words from RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge this week are New and Time.

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Check out Ron’s beautiful haiku above.

Let Me Go

by Vashti Quiroz-Vega

Frozen time in hell

Demons dance to make me mad

I need a new home

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Have you ever felt trapped somewhere you didn’t want to be?

23 Responses to “Haiku Friday – New & Time”

  1. Frank April 18, 2015 at 8:52 am #

    to see the future
    is to know all creation
    and make something new

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  2. Prakash Hegade April 18, 2015 at 12:43 pm #

    wow! your take on prompt is so unique! Loved it! 🙂

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  3. olganm April 18, 2015 at 1:25 pm #

    I hope things are OK (not sure how autobiographical is the haiku, if at all) but yes, indeed. I have been in places and situations I didn’t want to be in.

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega April 20, 2015 at 2:57 pm #

      Hello Olga! I’m okay. Thank you for the concern. Being in that kind of situation is difficult to say the least. 🙂

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  4. wccunningham April 18, 2015 at 6:57 pm #

    Yes! I attended a wedding held at a church I’d rather not mention. After the “contract” as they called it, I attended the wedding party dinner and about midway through it, I had to leave. It was a mixture of Children of the Corn and The Lottery and somewhere during all this, my God was saying “Get Out”.

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega April 20, 2015 at 2:59 pm #

      Oh wow! I’m sorry you were in that situation. It must have been scary. It sounds like a good idea for a horror story though.

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  5. Elizabeth April 18, 2015 at 9:19 pm #

    Hi Vashti, strong haiku, I hope your are ok, always there is an exit, we only need to find the right direction!

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  6. Silver Threading April 20, 2015 at 1:54 pm #

    Vashti, your haiku goes along with my fairies. ❤

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  7. JESS44903 April 20, 2015 at 11:20 pm #

    So talented! 🙂 Love your submissions!

    Thanks for joining the Link Up this week!

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  8. Yolanda Isabel Regueira Marin April 21, 2015 at 1:42 am #

    You just keep getting better xx

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  9. JunkChuck April 22, 2015 at 10:44 am #

    I always enjoy haiku with an understated finale

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  10. Joy @ Yesterfood April 28, 2015 at 5:40 pm #

    Vashti, I love haikus. I think I may be a little OCD, though- I always have to count the syllables before I can relax and read one. 🙂 Thank you for sharing these with us at Treasure Box Tuesday! ♥

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega April 30, 2015 at 9:10 am #

      Hi Joy! Ha, ha! Just a little OCD. 😉 I’m glad you enjoyed the post and I’m always happy to share at Treasure Box Tuesday! ❤ xx

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  11. allthatsjas May 1, 2015 at 2:40 pm #

    many times…I know the feeling. Thank you for sharing at Thursday Favorite Things. Hope you have a fabulous day!

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