Haiku Friday – Life & Give

27 Nov

Hello everyone! Welcome to my blog!

 

Ronovan from Ronovan Writes provided this week’s prompt words, Life and Give. Ronovan is a writer and poet and he also does author interviews and much more. You can read some of his poetry and fiction pieces on his blog. He also hosts RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge every Monday. Anyone can participate. Check out his Haiku Prompt Challenge Guidelines for more information.

Luis Royo-haiku friday-The Writer Next Door

Illustration by Luis Royo

Passion in the Garden of Eden

by Vashti Quiroz-Vega

Give in to banned love?

“My life for a glimpse of you”

His rhetoric wins

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Have a great Friday and weekend everyone! 😀

 

28 Responses to “Haiku Friday – Life & Give”

  1. Wild Daffodil November 27, 2015 at 2:32 pm #

    Intense!

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega November 27, 2015 at 2:40 pm #

      Thank you! The haiku is based on a section of the 1st book in my fantasy angels series, The Fall of Lilith. 😉

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  2. the secret keeper November 27, 2015 at 4:07 pm #

    I understand. A powerful story. I have been following Lilith since my awakening to female power. It is either psychic or something is in the air. I just finished rewriting my poem & it is about women’s power. Unfortunate for Lilith she was cast out of the Garden. In your fantasy series, it seems from your Haiku she didn’t make out much better.

    Your Haiku and the painting of your young woman is sad. I can feel her dejection. A powerful Haiku. You truly are an imaginative and a very sensitive writer. It shows in all I have read of your creative work. Beautifully written. Perfect image & Haiku together. xox 🙂 ❤

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega November 28, 2015 at 9:39 am #

      Hello my friend! Thank you for the kind and touching words. I want to print them on beautiful paper and frame them. 😀 ❤ xx

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      • the secret keeper November 29, 2015 at 3:42 pm #

        You are so kind. My words speak the truth and are meant completely. There will be many more. If you don’t realize, but I am sure you must, your generosity, kindness, and talent are who you are. And for me, it is a pleasure to feel the contact I have with you. 😀 ❤ xox

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      • Vashti Quiroz-Vega December 2, 2015 at 1:31 pm #

        Aw. I feel the same way about you. ❤ xx

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      • the secret keeper December 7, 2015 at 3:05 am #

        😀

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  3. denis1950 November 28, 2015 at 1:25 am #

    Very creative Vashti, haiku and Imagery come together naturally

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  4. Rajagopal November 28, 2015 at 1:35 am #

    Strikingly sensual….

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega November 28, 2015 at 9:44 am #

      Hello! That’s great! It wasn’t my intention to bring sensuality to it, well, maybe just a hint, but I’m glad it turned out that way. 😉

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  5. izza ifzaal November 28, 2015 at 8:56 am #

    I loved it

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  6. Ruby Manchanda November 28, 2015 at 9:53 am #

    Mesmerizing words

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  7. olganm November 28, 2015 at 11:20 am #

    She looks very strong, though. I intrigued by your story of Lilith…:)

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  8. Yolanda Isabel Regueira Marin November 28, 2015 at 2:18 pm #

    Nice work Vashti

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  9. Ronovan November 28, 2015 at 11:25 pm #

    You need to give me an update about things. Been wondering how a certain something has been going.

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega November 30, 2015 at 4:44 pm #

      Hi Ron! I’d love to talk to you about it. 🙂 Thanks for the interest. ❤

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  10. doreenhousehoneys November 29, 2015 at 7:44 pm #

    Love the visual Vashti!

    I’m also dying to know how Thanksgivng went??

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega November 30, 2015 at 4:55 pm #

      Thank you Doreen! My Thanksgiving was awesome. I hosted it in my house. I made the turkey and cornbread casserole, my mom, sister and niece Natasha made the mashed potatoes, green bean casserole and stuffing. My brother delivered the pies. Everything was delicious and we had a great time as a family. Oh, and we ate outside because the weather was perfect. I set two banquet tables together and we sat around it (pilgrim style). We had fun. 😉 I’m sure your Thanksgiving was fantastic also. Are you going to post about it?

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  11. dgkaye November 29, 2015 at 8:35 pm #

    Powerful Haiku and photo! 🙂

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  12. JESS44903 December 4, 2015 at 5:59 pm #

    So deep! I love it!

    Thanks for joining Cooking and Crafting with J & J!

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  13. Mrs_ AOK (@Mrs_AOK) December 6, 2015 at 1:04 pm #

    I need to sit down and try my hand at haiku. You inspire me with your skill, Vashti.
    XOXO

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega December 6, 2015 at 2:05 pm #

      Hi! Thank you! That’s the biggest compliment I could have gotten! 😀 I’m so happy I could inspire you. Go for it! I’d love to read what you come up with. 😉 xx

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