Haiku Friday – Wrong & Touch

27 Oct

Happy “Haiku Friday” and a warm welcome to my blog!

I hope you have something cool to drink, because the temperature is about to climb a few degrees.

Wrong and Touch are this week’s prompt words chosen by Ronovan Hester of Ronovan Writes.

Ron hosts a challenge that anyone could participate in called Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge every Monday, and you have until Sunday to create a post featuring your haiku poem. He is an author and poet and also does author interviews and much more on his blog. Be sure to check it out. Read Ron’s Haiku Prompt Challenge Guidelines for more information.

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I’m in the wrong bed

But your sweet touch reminds me

that I’m still alive

Touch me, my lover

I need to be reminded

My heart isn’t wrong

Lay your hands on me

I need to know I exist

In your callous heart

Taste my existence

Fill your mouth with my body

And it will haunt you

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Have a good one, everyone!



33 Responses to “Haiku Friday – Wrong & Touch”

  1. John W. Howell October 27, 2017 at 4:11 pm #

    Definitely a few degrees increase, Vashti. Excellent.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. olganm October 27, 2017 at 4:13 pm #

    Naughty, naughty! Happy Friday, Vashti!

    Liked by 2 people

  3. wiergeezy October 27, 2017 at 4:19 pm #

    Muy caliente Vashti!!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Annette Rochelle Aben October 27, 2017 at 4:41 pm #

    Well now… we have entered the red light district (so to speak) could this be a preview of a new book?

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q October 27, 2017 at 7:24 pm #

      Not at all, Annette. I have to read a whole lot of romance novels before I could attempt to write one.😻

      Liked by 1 person

  5. teandpaper October 27, 2017 at 8:11 pm #

    wow! these ones are hot, you can name them HH (hot haiku)! Lovely!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q October 27, 2017 at 11:53 pm #

      “Hot Haiku”, I like that! Ha, ha! I’m glad you had fun with it. Thank you❣️

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Sunni Morris October 27, 2017 at 11:02 pm #


    U were a little naughty in this one. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q October 27, 2017 at 11:57 pm #

      Just a little, Sunni. Thank you!❤️


  7. Al Lane October 28, 2017 at 3:58 am #

    Is it me, or did it just get hot in here?… 😀

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q October 29, 2017 at 12:37 pm #

      Hi Al! Would you like some lemonade to combat the heat? I make it slushy-style with lots of ice. Ha, ha! 😉

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Gwen Plano October 28, 2017 at 8:32 am #

    Wow, amazing writing, Vashti! Powerful images!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q October 29, 2017 at 12:38 pm #

      Thank you very much, Gwen! I’m so happy you enjoyed the haiku. 😀 xx


  9. robbiesinspiration October 28, 2017 at 9:27 am #

    Excellent, Vashti. Sadly, I don’t think I could write like this.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q October 29, 2017 at 12:40 pm #

      Hello Robbie! I felt the same way until I sat down and tried to do it. You’d be surprised what you can come up with. 😀 xx

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Billy Ray Chitwood October 28, 2017 at 1:05 pm #

    Why is my heart beating faster? Hot, hot, hot!!! ♥

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q October 29, 2017 at 12:42 pm #

      If your pulse quickened––I’ve done my job. 😉 Ha, ha! Thank you, Billy! ❤

      Liked by 1 person

  11. Denis1950 October 29, 2017 at 2:19 am #

    Powerful stuff Vashti. A strong hot north wind is blowing outside right now.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q October 29, 2017 at 12:44 pm #

      Wow! It is powerful stuff when you can get mother nature to go along with you. Ha, ha! Thank you, my friend! 😀

      Liked by 1 person

  12. Cleopatra Trevilcock October 29, 2017 at 1:45 pm #

    You are so eloquent and romantic.

    Liked by 1 person

  13. dgkaye October 29, 2017 at 11:59 pm #

    That’s what I call Hot Haiky. Fantastic Vashti. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Natalie Ducey October 30, 2017 at 1:29 pm #

    Fabulous, Vashti. Eloquent and evoking. Bravo!

    Liked by 2 people

  15. D. Wallace Peach October 31, 2017 at 10:22 pm #

    Steamy, Vashti. I can see where the prompt took your imagination 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Q November 1, 2017 at 10:53 pm #

      Hi Diana! Ha, ha! Thank you for stopping by and for your comment. 😀

      Liked by 1 person

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