Home and Free are this week’s prompt words chosen by Ronovan Hester of Ronovan Writes.
Ron hosts a challenge that anyone could participate in called Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge every Monday, and you have until Sunday to create a post featuring your haiku poem. He is an author and poet and also does author interviews and much more on his blog. Be sure to check it out. Read Ron’s Haiku Prompt Challenge Guidelines for more information.
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Gadreel’s Lamentation
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Nefarious deeds
Got me exiled from heaven
Now on earth I roam
Hiraeth beckons my soul
But I can’t ever go home
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I’d gladly give up
the freedom earth allows me
for one day back home
Where flowers sing lullabies
and leaves dance all aquiver
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Love the second tanka, Vashti. “Where flowers sing lullabies” is a beautiful thought. ❤
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Hi Olga! I was describing ‘Floraison’ my version of heaven in, The Fall of Lilith my novel about angels. I’m happy you enjoyed the poem. Have a lovely day and weekend! ❤
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Aw, the lament of the heart… expressed so well
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Hi Annette! Thank you, my friend!
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Reblogged this on DENIS LEVIEUX PHOTOGRAPHE INFOGRAPHISTE.
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Love it! I miss Floraison too! 😀 Have a great weekend and thank you so much for sharing your work every week, it’s a real pleasure!
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Hi Kester! Aww, it’s my pleasure. You make sharing so much fun. Thank you! ❤
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A glorious post, Vashti. The illustration is awe inspiring. Hugs.
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Thank you, Teagan! I love that illustration. Jeff captured Floraison beautifully. Hugs & Kisses ❤
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This got me all excited for your new book! I would want to be where the flowers sang, too! Have a great weekend, Vashti!
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Hi Denise! Thank you for the sweet comment. Have a wonderful Sunday night and new week! ❤
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My goodness, I love this Vashti. I can imagine the flowers singing. 😊
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I’m so happy you enjoyed the post, Gwen. Thank you! ❤
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Absolutely gorgeous Vashti, the photos are beautiful but your words evoke the sadness in Gadreel’s heart. I felt the most sorry for her because she’s not evil like some of those other angels, she just got caught up in the wrong crowd, lol. 🙂 ❤
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Your understanding of this character is right on, Debby. Poor Gadreel is a victim of peer pressure and falling for the bad guy. 😉 Ha, ha. ❤ xx
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Yes, and that’s why I’m so looking forward to book 2 ❤
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Lovely poem and illustration Vashti. 🙂
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Thank you, Marje! Jeff Brown’s interpretation of Floraison is amazing. 😀 xx
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Indeed it is Vashti. 🙂
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I love Gadreel, even though she was often very weak. I hope to read more of her story in future books. 🙂
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Hi Yvette! Yay! I’m so happy you could related to Gadreel. She’s one of my favorites also. She’s in the 2nd book, although she is not the protagonist. However, she is the protagonist in the 3rd book. 😀 Thank you!
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Awesome! I can’t wait to read both books! 🙂
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Awesome! ❤ xx
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