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Today I wrote a two sentence Horror/Romance story and a Haiku. I’m not sure if the combination of these can be called a Haibun. I also wrote a Tanka. I hope you enjoy.
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Each night on the stroke of midnight her young, dead husband would text her. His final message, the one found beside the body at the crash site, read, ‘Stop texting me. I’m driving’.
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Final rendezvous
Fire ignited your obsession
A text snuffed it out
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On a less tragic note . . .
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Soft rosy petals
Your lips pressing against mine
Under a blanket of stars
In a place where there is love
Rendezvous in the moonlight
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Congregate and Passion are this week’s prompt words chosen by Colleen Chesebro ~ The Fairy Whisperer. *The catch is that we can only use the synonyms to these words in our poems.
Colleen hosts a challenge that anyone could participate in called, Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge every Tuesday, and you have until Sunday to create a post featuring your Haiku, Tanka, Haibun or Cinquain poem. She is an author and poet, and also does book reviews and so much more on her blog. Be sure to check it out.
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Oh, My Goodness! Amazing verses! The use of rendezvous in each is brilliant. ♥
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Hi, Gwen! Thank you very much! Have a great Friday and weekend! ❤
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Ooh, you are such a romantic! ❤
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I can be––sometimes. Ha, ha! Thank you, Annette! ❤
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You’re so good at these. I’m continually amazed.
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Wow! Thank you for that, Craig! The admiration is mutual. Have a wonderful weekend! 😀 xx
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Really well written Vashti! Reads like a great romance novel! ❤
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A miniature one. Ha, ha. Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. ❤
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Great take.
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Thank you, Indira! Happy weekend! 😀
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Thanks. Happy weekend to you too.
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Perfect and so different. And love the sculpture as well. Thanks, Vashti!
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Hi, Olga! I’m happy you enjoyed the post. I like the sculpture too. I think it was brilliant that they used a wrecked car to create an emoji. Hopefully the message of ‘Don’t text and drive’ will stick with the kids (and kids at heart). Thank you! 😀 xx
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I am so proud of you!
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Hi, Cleo! Thank you very much! ❤ xx
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Hahahaha, that’s beyond creative. I LOVE it!!
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Thank you, Lynda! I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Have a great weekend! ❤
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You need to write for Harlequin, Vashti! LOL! Your creativity is amazing. Happy weekend! ❤
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I wish, Jill! Ha, ha! That’s very nice of you to say. Thank you very much! ❤ xx
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You could! Periodically, they offer contests within all of their lines..that’s how I got my foot in the door with them.
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That sounds great! I’ll look into it. Thank you very much! 😀
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I’ll keep an eye out for you, too. ❤ Enjoy your weekend!
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Aw, thank you. You have a great weekend too! ❤
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This page on Twitter is where they typically announce their contests, Vashti. @HarlequinSYTYCW ❤
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Thank you, Jill! ❤
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Vashti!! Both your Haibun/Senryu and your Tanka poem are spectacular. I love both of them. Your creativity is a joy to see each week. ❤
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Thank you for clarifying that, Colleen. And for your lovely compliment. I’m happy you enjoyed the post. ❤ xx
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You are a creative. I always enjoy your poetry and stories. ❤️
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Thank you, Colleen. I appreciate that. I think we’re kindred spirits. ❤
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I agree. I know if someone gets my poetry or my writing, I’m ecstatic! I get your’s Vashti. ❤
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Vashti, timely message and the visual was great, too! You don’t disappoint.🤗
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Hi, Linda! Isn’t that emoji sculpture great? I’m a big advocate of ‘Don’t Text and Drive’. Thanks so much for the kind words, my friend! Enjoy the weekend! ❤ xx
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What a variety Vashti! Loved all the verses, they fit so well with each other and the story. 🙂
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I’m happy you think so, Balroop! 😀 Thank you and enjoy your weekend!
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You too have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
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Thank you! ❤ xx
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I love how you always touch upon such important topics. 🙂
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Hi, Yvette! I try to add a little something about issues I find important, when I can. Thank you for noticing. 😀 xx
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Wow, that was magical in your short story. It may warrant a longer one? And a most beautiful Haiku Vashti. I always enjoy reading your prose. ❤ xxx
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Hi, Debby! I think some short stories have a bigger impact remaining short, but who knows. 😉 I’m always happy when you enjoy my post. Thank you so much. ❤ xx
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I totally agree with you on powerful short stories! ❤
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide.
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Thank you for reblogging, Traci! 😀 xx
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You’re welcome, Vashti!
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Loved this Vashti. xxx
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Hi, Adele! I’m so happy to see you! It’s wonderful that you enjoyed the post. Thank you! ❤ xx
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My pleasure, Vashti. ❤
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Oh my goodness, what a haunting emoji and powerful poem. I’m glad my people don’t drive and text. I’m a bit of a romantic too. I like the idea of rendezvousing with the dog of my dreams “under a blanket of stars”. I didn’t use the right one for the doggy gender because I think that word can be misused in people circles. Love Ben xx
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Ha, ha! Yes! Thank you, Ben for not using the proper word for female dog on my blog. 😉 I think that emoji sculpture made from a wrecked car is very clever, the message is loud and clear. I’m happy you enjoyed the post. 😀
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Wow! The first one is so tragic. Sign of the times. Nicely written, Vashti. 🙂
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Hi, Olga! I know, but it’s such a dumb way to die, because it’s so easily avoidable. The text can wait, at least until you’re stopped at a traffic light. Thank you! 😀 xx
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Awwaa – this so amazing and nicely written and presented!!
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Thank you, Mino!I hope all is well on your end. All the best to you and your family. 😀 xx
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Well done. Texting while driving makes no sense at all and the tragedy is too real. Your second poem is much more romantic – a result of getting home safely perhaps. 🙂
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Thank you, Diana! You’re so right, I couldn’t agree more.
Ah, ha, ha! Yes! It’s the result of saying it in person when you arrive home safely instead of texting it. 😉 xx
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Creative and romantic. Well done
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Thank you, Darnell. 🙂
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Brilliant and poignant.
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Thank you very much, Janet. 🙂
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