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Word Craft Poetry – Colleen Chesebro Poetry Challenge
Last month, Colleen Chesebro asked Yvette Calleiro to select a syllabic form for us to learn more about. Yvette’s choice was a form that Gwen Plano created, called the 4-11. You can find her 4-11 form HERE.
Gwen says the 4-11 is a stanza of eleven lines, four syllables each line. The beginning line also repeats as the last line. Here is Gwen’s example.
So here’s my attempt at Gwen Plano’s 4-11 poetry style: War of the Roses🥀
🌹Lover’s quarrel
War of roses
Can you hear my
heart shattering?
Who are we but
lovers who know
each other’s hearts?
Please take me back
You are my soul
Kiss and make up
Lover’s quarrel🌹
I hope you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for stopping by. Have a fabulous day❣️
Love your poem, Vashti. Well done!
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Hi Olga! It’s lovely to see you. I’m happy you enjoyed the poem. Thank you❣️
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Great job, Vashti 😁
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Thank you, John!🥰
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You write beautiful poetry.
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Thank you, Martha❣️I’m happy you liked it.
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I love it!!
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Thank you, sweetheart❣️
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Beautifully poignant, Vashti. I hope they kissed and made up. 💞
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They did kiss and made up.♥️
Thank you for creating this lovely poetry form, Gwen!
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Those quarrels can be devastating. I too hope they found each other again. (K)
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They call it heartbreak for a reason. There’s real physical pain. No worries, though. These two will make it. Thank you.🥰
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Good news!
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I love how this became a story, Vashti 🙂 Fingers crossed they make up xo
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Thank you, Denise! They do make up, and they lived happily ever after.😘
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🙂
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Oh how those quarrels can break a heart! Brilliantly done, Vashti 💕🙂
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Yes! You’re so right. I felt this one. Thank you, Harmony❣️
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A fabulous response to the prompt, Vashti!
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I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem, Jan. Thank you❣️
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Oh, well done, Sis! I loved the image and your poem. ❤️
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Yay! That makes me super excited, Sis! Thank you!💖
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You’re so welcome! 💜
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Beautiful, Vashti! xo
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Thank you, Jill!🥰
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Such tumultuous emotions in a lovers’ quarrel. Loved the poem and the form has been really fun. Well done, Vashti.
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You’re so right about that. I’m happy you liked the poem. Gwen did an amazing job coming up with this form. It is fun. Thank you very much!🥰
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Love it, Vashti! Well done! 🙂 If you haven’t already, make sure you add it to the link that Colleen provides so everyone can see it. 🙂
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Hi Yvette! I’m ecstatic that you enjoyed the post. I’m sure I did add the link but I’ll double check. Thank you❣️
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This is very beautiful, Vashti.
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Thank you, Robbie. I’m happy you like it.💕
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this makes me think of a soap opera! 😀
~David
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😂Soap operas do mimic real life sometimes. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.😊
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Beautiful but very sad. I hope these lovers find their way back to each other ❤
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Thank you, Debby. I’m sure they will.♥️
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Great poem Vashti, so lovely, thank you so much for sharing 💖💖💖
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Thank you, Jaye! I’m happy you like it.💗🌸💗
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This was perfect for the 4-11
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I’m glad you think so, Jude❣️
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