Haiku Friday – Cake & Wolf

10 Dec

Happy Haiku Friday Everyone!

Ronovan from Ronovan Writes provided this week’s prompt words, Cake and Wolf. Ronovan is a writer and poet and he also does author interviews and much more. You can read some of his poetry and fiction pieces on his blog. He also hosts RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge every Monday. Anyone can participate. Check out his Haiku Prompt Challenge Guidelines for more information.

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Broken Heart Syndrome

by Vashti Quiroz-Vega

Wolf Dressed as a man

Devoured her dainty heart

Hollow flesh remains

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Illustration by Veronnikka (J.W.) – DeviantART

Have a fun and safe weekend! 

47 Responses to “Haiku Friday – Cake & Wolf”

  1. Janice December 10, 2015 at 11:54 pm #

    I like the double feel about it–at first I read it as a horror story and then saw the title and read it as a romantic tragedy. I like the words you chose too.

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    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega December 11, 2015 at 12:12 am #

      I can see how you could have read the haiku as horror. I guess some love stories do end horrible. 😉 By the way, This is not my story. At the moment my heart is happy and healthy––not broken. 😀 xx

      Liked by 2 people

      • Janice December 11, 2015 at 12:36 am #

        Good to know…I didn’t think it was autobiographical…..:)

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Frank December 11, 2015 at 1:12 am #

    I love it – but how about:

    wolf dressed as a man
    devouring her tender flesh

    Liked by 1 person

  3. edwinasepisodes December 11, 2015 at 1:20 am #

    A sad haiku, but I loved your take on the prompt words! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Ritu December 11, 2015 at 1:40 am #

    Great one Vashti! They were tough words this week!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega December 13, 2015 at 4:49 pm #

      That’s awesome coming from you Ritu. Thank you! 😀

      Liked by 1 person

      • Ritu December 13, 2015 at 4:51 pm #

        Thank you for thinking so highly of my opinion 😘 virtual hugs all round! (((Hugs))) ☺

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  5. Wild Daffodil December 11, 2015 at 1:40 am #

    Intense!

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  6. Al The Author December 11, 2015 at 2:06 am #

    Beautifully sad x

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  7. Prakash Hegade December 11, 2015 at 6:03 am #

    I felt like ‘wow’ at first for the way emotions are captured and then felt ‘eww’ for the one who is expressing this.
    Very nicely done! Awesome! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega December 13, 2015 at 4:51 pm #

      Oh, I’m so happy that you took the time to analyze it. Thank you. It’s cool that you liked it. 😀

      Liked by 1 person

  8. stacilys December 11, 2015 at 7:54 am #

    Spectacular haiku Vashti. Really packs a punch.
    Happy Friday and weekend to you. 🙂 ❤

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega December 13, 2015 at 4:53 pm #

      Hi Staci! I hope you’re having an awesome Sunday. Thank you so much for the cool comment. Made my day! 😀

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Sarina December 11, 2015 at 11:02 am #

    Outch!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. olganm December 11, 2015 at 12:15 pm #

    There’s a whole story in three lines. Powerful, Vashti. Happy weekend!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega December 13, 2015 at 4:56 pm #

      Hi! That’s wonderful of you to say. Thank you! My weekend has been relaxing––one of those ‘all about writing’ weekends. 😉

      Like

  11. nagrij December 11, 2015 at 1:36 pm #

    Nice and dark; I like it.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. FlorenceT December 12, 2015 at 9:54 am #

    Vashti, ouch!! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  13. jazzytower December 12, 2015 at 11:42 am #

    Very emotional!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. specialk718 December 12, 2015 at 3:15 pm #

    I LOVE IT!!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Annette Rochelle Aben December 12, 2015 at 4:55 pm #

    Tells the tale of a be-WEREWOLF! Fine job.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Vashti Quiroz-Vega December 13, 2015 at 5:04 pm #

      Tells the tale of a man (werewolf wannabe) who tears a woman’s heart out of her chest with his betrayal. 😉

      Liked by 1 person

  16. Olga December 13, 2015 at 3:59 pm #

    Very powerful words. Well-written, Vashti. The second photo really added to the dramatic effect.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Alice December 14, 2015 at 11:03 am #

    Now you gave me chills!

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Marje @ Kyrosmagica December 14, 2015 at 1:01 pm #

    Wow that’s some haiku Vashti definitely a favourite of mine!!

    Liked by 1 person

  19. JESS44903 December 15, 2015 at 2:05 pm #

    So good! You’re so talented! 🙂

    Thanks for joining Cooking and Crafting with J & J!

    Liked by 1 person

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